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Monster Girl in My Closet

By: Jamie Hawke
Narrated by: Daniel Wisniewski, Rebecca Woods
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Summary

Some people have nightmares of finding a monster in their closet, but how many fantasize about it?

If you fall into the latter category, you get me. There I was, simply working to program my visual novel and find my muse, when bam! Monster girl in my closet.

Needless to say, she changed my life. For the better at first, sure. But then there was the hunter, and the crazy lady who spoke of another world where the monsters live.

So the adventure began.

Warning: Monster ladies, adult situations, and violence abound.

©2020 Jamie Hawke (P)2020 Jamie Hawke
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Better, but still pretty bad.

Starts off OK, as you have a strong sense of the first two characters, but as soon as the second monster girl gets introduced, things go off the rails and random shit (like stealing an old man's water bottle for no reason??) just keeps happening. All of the careful character building gets shoved aside so that he can get to some random battle of which the MC is practically a spectator.
The whole true name rule just conveniently flies out the window into in importance at the end to.

Worse, I really didn't like the MC occilating between premature ejaculation and erectile dysfunction. I get that the dude is young and dumb but why add so many sexual hangups in a pulpy erotic fantasy??

This will be the last book I try with this author.

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